Everyday news and media introduce us with different kinds of job as well as high salary demands. While some people think that big salary is more important than satisfaction of what we do. Though, money is essential for our day-to-day life, but I strongly disagree that money is more needful than job satisfaction. Huge salary might improve our life lifestyle. The way are live, saving, finance so on. Thus, around the world have uncountable things like peace, relaxation, happiness, money never can buy.
First of all, I believe that the one who holding big salary he or she have to maintain job with more stress. They may have to work more with too much responsibilities. In that case they have to give more times and affords to their job. Meanwhile, they are unable to make them self Happy as well as their family. For example, normally IT professional have huge salary, but their assignments, targets, projects killing them badly. As a result, they are putting concentration only for finishing the work not for obtaining the pleasure of fulfilment.
Moreover, for earning more people sometimes have to work all over the year, may be without taking any leave or holidays. All those are never proof good for health. Work load and work tension can be a reason of different kinds of disease. Recent study of the Harvard University can be taken for highlighting it. In 2012 they got that 40 percent employees are suffering heart disease and depression. So, we can tell that job satisfaction maintain our health and keep us away from illness.
One more point can be added that, job satisfaction help to bring growth on career. Working with happiness inhence creativity multitasking and responsibility, which through people can achieve career target. To illustrate, famous actor Jim Herry did various kinds of works for maintaining family but his attraction was only on comedy movies, after that he began running comedy shows and he become famous. He also got opportunity to do many comedy movies. By that he fulfill his dream of childhood.
In conclusion, everyone have different choose buy after all money can not by happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... of job as well as high salary demands. While some people think that big salary is mo...
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Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...he one who holding big salary he or she have to maintain job with more stress. They ...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ss. They may have to work more with too much responsibilities. In that case they hav...
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Line 9, column 47, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to buy'
Suggestion: to buy
...clusion, everyone have different choose buy after all money can not by happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, after all, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98879551821 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71363377566 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610644257703 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0189432863 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2083333333 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.875 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95833333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157568755402 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446962195835 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663752015195 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808596124434 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833308835305 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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