Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place.
What is your opinion about this?
I belive that, it is crucial to keep home and office businesslike,straight,fully organised, and everything are tidy-kept.
To begin with, nowadays it is most important to keep office and home well maintained.when people come to office they want to do work with fresh mind and fresh and fresh environment. when their office,sitting area, parking area,canteen, labrotary are well maintained, and every needed things are in exact place then employee feel rejuvenate. it will be beneficial, if everything is user-friendly.it is also fruitful for employer also.If every thing is well maintained it decrease work stress, moreover employee focus on their main work rather than finding something which are kept in any where.when office is well organised and separates each and every section, then employee find proper object in proper place.moreover it great habit of all employee and other worker to put everything in its proper place. when all sections are mix-up then it is so confusing for employee and they did not focus on their work,they completely go in stress. they could not find anything interesting.
The second part of the discussion is home. it is also beneficial to kept home clean,well maintained. when everything is fully organised then it is interesting to the home members. when kitchen area are messy or some other objects,utensils are found here and there it feels so stressful. when we give everything have special place then we need not to search something all over the home.we found things in proper place , moreover it increase the working speed. it decrease level of embarrassment to find something. when our home is decorated and well maintained , then it is not only looks beautiful but also feels refreshing every time.
To recapitulate my opinion is , it is necessary to kept home and work place tidy,well maintained, because it is vital to save time , it decrease stress and increase level of happiness to doing office work or home chores.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, second, so, then, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16300940439 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.192726616 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 2.10420841683 523% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 104.860451485 49.4020404114 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 117.642857143 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125426879432 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488100073226 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379249044784 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921705275156 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0115935858435 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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