Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place. What is your opinion about it?
It is clear that the atmosphere which people work or live should be pleasant because they spend a sizable amount of time in there. However, some people believe that home or workplace should not be kept tidy.
On the one hand, tidy atmosphere has numerous positive impacts. Firstly, people who keep their workplace tidy, they are more likely to work efficiently because there is nothing to distract them. Thus, they can take full advantages of pleasant workplace. Secondly, tidy home leads to sending positive energy. Consequently, people who live in tidy home have a sense of satisfaction because they can find stuff in proper place. Also, they might make others happy and calm. Thirdly, tidy home or workplace is the center of attention because it is decorated tastefully.
On the other hand, unpleasant environment has adverse effects on people’s life. The most important effect is that it can cause mental disorder in a long time because everything is not organized and people should spend a lot of time on find stuffs. Therefore, people become careless or they always make a mistake. Another thing is that the other people cannot trust them. Since they are more likely to be sloppy and people cannot turn to when something bad comes up. Also, this kind of people do not follow law because they find it difficult and they encourage messy behavior.
In conclusion, form my point of view by keeping home and workplace tidy in fact we respect each other. Thus, whenever one’s come to home they feel comfortable and cozy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: APOSTROPHE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Consider using the plural form here: 'ones'.
Suggestion: ones
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, another thing, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93023255814 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47732339068 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565891472868 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.642660011 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8235294118 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1764705882 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.94117647059 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170087045523 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605665575103 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439999142727 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111455450551 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187805794018 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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