Some people say it is important to keep your home and workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?
According to many people it is believed that it is necessary to organize things at our home as well as at our office by placing all the objects at their designated spots in order to keep our personal and professional environment clean. In the following paragraphs I will discuss why it is a must to follow this practice.
The main advantage is that this practice promotes healthy lifestyle choices by helping a person to stay active. In order to keep things organised an individual will have to take a responsibility to clean the mess every time they observe things getting out of order. Hence, this will push a person to say not to procrastination and will increase their willpower to work more enthusiastically. According to a survey conducted by Toronto university it was found that 80% of people who keep their environment neat finished their work before the deadline.
The other advantage is that keeping our surroundings helps us to stay in a positive mood. When things around us are not clean it can make us feel overwhelmed. Whereas, keeping our personal and professional space tidy reduces the levels of stress inducing hormones. In a study done by Harvard University it is concluded that 90% of people who complain about stress disorders have an unorganized bedroom and workplace.
To conclude, it is a must to keep our work as well as our home environment organized by clearing out clutter and keeping things at their place. In my opinion this statement is very true as in the absence of this habit a person can not be productive and happy. I recently started organizing my bedroom and work desk every evening. I observed that it uplifted my energy levels and work productivity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, thus, well, whereas, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85862068966 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91447859719 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6985937778 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.642857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156629740039 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515641087837 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359370132684 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983650728018 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252981294832 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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