Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place.
What is your opinion about this?
organisational skills go a long way in helping you succeed in life. A few people express the significance of maintaining the house and even their professional ambit clean and tidy. I opine that a structured environment would certainly make the whole world a better place to dwell in and during the course of the essay I shall further justify my claims through valid examples.
First and foremost, a tidy workplace, would be able to meet their targeted growth in their required time limit or even sooner. Since a neat workplace is less prone to misplacements which would lead to lot of wasteful expenditure, so not only an unorganised workplace is more time consuming, effort inducing as well as even cost increasing. For instance, In India Public offices or Government offices are highly disorganised in functioning as well as in administration. Whereas, on the other hand the private sector has shown a steady growth in the recent years due to proper planning as well as execution of their projects. that is why of late private organisations are highly recommended in terms of proficiency.
Secondly, a highly disorganised workplace or even home could take a person a couple of hours to even retrace his objects of daily use and clearing the clutter is not an arduous skill or a time consuming art it is just a matter of habit. it will certainly reap rich benefits to whosoever, organises his thoughts, his files and even his workplace he is bound to see a prolific result in his level of efficiency, accuracy and even his temperament is going to become more placid as good organizational skills have simply got therapeutic effect. For instance, world known celebrities who have a fetish for orderly placing of articles, be it at work or at home like David Beckham, Madonna, Cameron Dias they all have been able to make a mark in their lives because of their excellent organizational skills which reflects on their high level of success, health and even personality
To sum up, I would again like to acknowledge the importance of basic cleanliness and even neatness which brightens up our life as well as even enlightens our soul
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, even so, for instance, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93939393939 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94818099948 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586776859504 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.521051588 49.4020404114 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.0 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0643418257378 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0262613079726 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0185910623776 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0395908599986 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169811291223 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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