Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place.
Several people believe to keep things neat, organized and placing daily use belongings in right place not only in home also in office location. I strongly agree on this statement and to justify this essay will provide convincing examples
Firstly, there are people who usually misplace their properties like keys in home and project materials in office. Later end up in wasting lot of time by searching in wrong locations, sometimes they also insist their loved to help them to find what they are looking for. To prove that Standford University had done many surveys with the age group of 20 to 60 years and the results show that 70% of people who are older than 40+ losing time because of not keeping their stuffs in the correct place. However, just 30% of people have never come crossed due to following tidiness in their surroundings.
On the other hand, it is not important all the things have to be place in the correct locations. As much as people aware that for time being it is not kept in the desire place it be would fine. For instance, I enjoy reading, I have taken a book from shelf and I will be carrying to bedroom, study and living room till I finish reading the book. By this way I aware that something I must complete in time. It is kind of reminder to achieve something which is important to me.
To conclude, keeping things organized and placing it in the right place is easy to get the stuffs at the time when needed however certain things which we use often has not to be in right place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help them find' instead.
Suggestion: help them find
...metimes they also insist their loved to help them to find what they are looking for. To prove tha...
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Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...g it is not kept in the desire place it be would fine. For instance, I enjoy readi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, for instance, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51086956522 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30820705002 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.2258820213 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.181818182 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193087249183 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713574286123 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626487546882 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116905397232 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213644274514 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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