some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person´s culture and character from their choice of clothes.
agree or disagree ?
The contentious argument that whether costumes apprises culture and personality of an individual has sparked a debatable discussion among many. However, recalling last two decades reminds me of the drastic changes in clothing styles and fashions. the subject has variety of directions to discuss, nonetheless, i will enlighten some and implore my notion.
Advocates sound smoothly with the opinion that clothes are considered as mannequin to express religion of people. To illustrate, as far as Muslims are concerned they can be notified from far away through clothing especially on some religious events. In the same way a person wearing turban represent Sikhism. Moreover, personalities and manners of people can also be judged by clothing choices. For example, one of my friend has very good manners, naive in nature and elegant in talking always wear neat and tidy clothes even for going out for casual walk.
On the flip side, there are some cons in outfits reflect the people´s customs and characters. first of all numerous individuals disuse costumes in order to deceive others as persons hide their hideous nature through embellished outfits and fringed themselves with innovative fashion and styles.
In culmination of above discussion, I tend to agree with the statement that outfits expound more about cultures, personalities and customs of people. However, to some extent we should not fully consider clothes in order to perceive any person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, for example, first of all, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41048034934 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80878033375 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676855895197 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0794941833 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.25 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160291288325 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055704490078 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401764019111 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940208749646 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291895827962 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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