Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagrees?
some people believe clothes which people choose to wear can reveal so much of their personal and cultural attitudes. I disagree with the opinion given, because there are different economic and social reasons that cause a person to wear despite of her or him favourite style.
A good reason that the personal character and culture is not revealed just by a person clothes style is that, firstly, from the perspective of job position, some jobs require to wear formal clothes such as, suits or which are against of a person personality. For example a woman who is working an Islamic bank must wear scarf, although, she is not a religious person. Secondly, some job conditions may need to be distinguished from a usual person life firefighters. So they have to wear a specific color and sometimes it is not the color that a person love.
Another reason that people should not judge other persons from the style of their clothes is that in terms of economic issues some people are not able to prepare the goods which they really like to wear and they have to choose cheaper or uglier clothes which is not compatible with their actual appetite. For example, in slum sites of the city people are not able to consider the brand of their clothes or even their colors, they prefer to wear donated and used clothes.
To conclude, while there are some people who tend to measure other’s personality and culture from their clothes style, I strongly believe it is not a good way to have hindsight from people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
some people believe clothes which people cho...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wearing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: wearing
...tive of job position, some jobs require to wear formal clothes such as, suits or which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7680608365 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44270463607 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51711026616 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.4132423011 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.333333333 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2222222222 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255397334333 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117909140197 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655532523583 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179207595074 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030108045536 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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