Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problem.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
Although few individuals believe that the most prominent environmental problem in recent years is of extinct plants and animals, in my opinion, they are certainly important but not the most important ones. In the essay, I will discuss both sides and provide my point of view with examples.
On the one hand, those who argue in favour of the loss of flora and fauna as a leading issue for our biosphere may say so based on studies done to understand the negative impacts of missing plants and animals on human life. For example, it is a well-known fact that due to over-tourism we have lost coral reefs in Australia. They were natural homes used by nearby sea-animals for breeding and now there is a growing fear that these sea animals are close to getting extinct. Humans need plants and animals not only to satisfy their hunger but also to keep the lifecycle running. If any step of this cycle is tampered with, the impacts will be huge for our ecosystem.
On the other hand, in my view, the most important problem in our ecosystem is pollution. The urban areas around the world increasingly suffer from chronic respiratory diseases due to rising pollution. For instance, Asthma in children is peaking every other day, making them ill for life. Another vital problem for our environment, greater then the loss of flora and fauna is of global warming. We can consider the example of glaciers melting at a very high rate. The melted ice is making the water level rise in seashore cities and there is a growing concern of these cities getting submerged in the water soon affecting the people living there.
In conclusion, despite understanding the importance of lifecycle steps broken with extinct plants and animals and its huge negative effects we must take into consideration that saving kids from chronic diseases and saving seashore cities from getting submerged is more just, and justice in my view is paramount.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'greater than'?
Suggestion: greater than
...ther vital problem for our environment, greater then the loss of flora and fauna is of globa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87195121951 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.554950811 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582317073171 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5187048913 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.142857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235343055343 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072404194619 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697874806634 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13176480038 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465020470301 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'greater than'?
Suggestion: greater than
...ther vital problem for our environment, greater then the loss of flora and fauna is of globa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87195121951 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.554950811 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582317073171 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5187048913 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.142857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235343055343 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072404194619 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697874806634 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13176480038 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465020470301 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.