Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?
In today's world, everyone is running behind one thing and that is money. People have the perception that happiness comes along with the money. This essay will explore constructive arguments on how money can make people happy and what other things are necessary apart from money that helps to make people contented.
Undeniably, money is utmost significant weapon to combat many battles of life. One can purchase any materialistic stuff with it which consequently brings joy. A brand new expensive car, for instance, if given to any person irrespective of age can bring a great deal of pleasure. Not only happiness comes in the form of physical objects but also satisfaction. The contentment of secured future adds more to its high protection status. A wealthy person is financially stable and do not have to worry about hospital bills, children's education, retirement life and much more.
With the above salient features of money, other factors that contribute to happiness now merit some useful discussion. First, good health and stable mind can make person joyful even if there is a lack of treasure. Secondary, good friends and life partner who play a vital role in everyone's lives can bring immense happiness and also cannot be bought by money. Lastly, but equally important, knowledge can make one contented. Money can help in you in getting education, but cannot help you become knowledgeable. For instance, good people around you often leads to cheerful mood and right education makes you knowledgeable.
By and large, money is tremendously important but it is not everything. If only money can buy happiness, not every tenth person of high class society would suffer from depression. As said "It is always better to cry in luxury car than on bicycle ", money still holds the top position in the list of happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, lastly, second, so, still, apart from, for instance, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0701754386 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69227317935 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5062469776 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391246541023 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109864642607 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110428156579 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231084730184 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157198323424 0.056905535591 276% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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