Its better to cry in a Mercedes than living happily without it. With advancement of technologies and more source of investement, people tends to have a knack for materialistics facilities and luxuries. This leads to the saying of money is the only way to happiness.
Nowadays with enourmous upgradation of technologies , few sections of people tends to have a slight inclination towards materialistics happiness. Social medias, peer pressure are some of the examples which made common masses believe that there cannot be other source of happiness except monetary.It may give us a thought why few sections of people believes that monetary satisfaction is the ultimate one. I feel that its due to plethora of new sources of financial investments that allures us to look forward a luxorious and satisfying life. Perhaps, huge amount of money may give us a sense of security in later stages of life so that one can spend the rest of their lives independently. Masses from the middle strata or lower strata of the society raised in childhood in hunger and financial crisis. It is quite normal to run behind money which may give them and their family to fulfill their daily needs.
Happiness is a state of mind and it differs from person to person. Some people are not happy after earning crores while some remains satisfied by dedicating their lives for the sake of common people. In our lives of daily grinding and running in a rat race, it is more important to achieve peace and contentment which may give us the naked source of being happy. Other than this I would like to add that contribute to social cause be it helping unfortunates, providing hand to have a clean environment and society for us and others to live. Several yogis, saints are in peace with normal and simplified living. Its upto us what we want to choose in our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...th enourmous upgradation of technologies , few sections of people tends to have a ...
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Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...iness. Social medias, peer pressure are some of the examples which made common masses belie...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...her source of happiness except monetary.It may give us a thought why few sections ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81703470032 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7145724386 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561514195584 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9496061153 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231432427131 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698066023862 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502992823481 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15761468865 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173709059438 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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