Nice to hear from you after a long time. Hope you are doing well. I would like to thank you for the invitation I received last week from you. But feeling sorry as I won't be able to make it this time as my induction is planned during the same time frame.
I have recently got selected by a multinational company and you will be happy to know that I am getting a higher position there as a lead engineer. But the joining process of the company is already scheduled at the time of your invitation. As I'm exited and also serious about the new opportunity, so left out with no option to postpone it.
Anyways, I was already thinking about to go for a trip during this winter. I can plan the a visit to your place on my way back; obviously if are at your place during that time, or perhaps may be at the starting of the trip.
Waiting for your response.
Yours, Chiranjit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...uled at the time of your invitation. As Im exited and also serious about the new o...
^^
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...r a trip during this winter. I can plan the a visit to your place on my way back; obv...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, if, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 711.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25748502994 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38838849103 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652694610778 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0136801979 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19525495508 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777382001237 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645702604844 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123795722291 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338940294916 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.