Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I am unhappy with my current living conditions. While the accommodation itself is fine, my housemate has become intolerable making it almost impossible for me to work. I hope you will consider my situation favourably.
Let me explain my situation. The trouble started about three months ago when my housemate first moved in. Prior to that, everything was fine; my old housemate was extremely considerate. My current housemate, however, stays up almost all night and plays loud music. As such, I have not been able to sleep properly and therefore cannot concentrate on my studies.
Would you kindly transfer me or my housemate to another room? I would much prefer to live with someone who is quieter and more considerate of others. As long as it is quiet, I don't mind whom I live with.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Jay
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...te of others. As long as it is quiet, I dont mind whom I live with. Thank you for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, therefore, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89677419355 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82920696853 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.709677419355 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7922573419 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.3846153846 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.9230769231 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155254248683 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583857169987 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565768923479 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118448378557 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673485681492 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.25 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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