Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this contemporary era, entertainment is part of our life style and films has major role in it. Nowadays, many digital platfom provide films over the phone or tablets and there is no requirement to visit cinema, that is thought by some individuals. However, other think that theatre is the best place for the real entertainment. In this essay we discuss both the views in below pragraphs.
At one hand, people can easily watch films on electronics gadgets and main benifit is any time and anywere individual can see the movie. For instance you can watch the video while traveling in train or in flight. However, this digital platform applicaton has costly subscription. For example mostly famous films are launch by Netflix and they have more charges compare to others.
On the other hand, theatre has big screen with fantastic souround sound system that can fascinate the people experiance. To illustrate person can visit with their family or friends and enjoy a lot. In contrast, costly cinema tickets and physical presence in theater are unbenificial for the person. For example, most has limited parking space and to reach at theatre people may face city traffic, and someone can miss the starting if late.
To sum up, in this fast digital world where time is the money, in my opinion, indeed we can save the traveling time to reach till the theatre and can enjoy movies by watching on gadgets.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'screened'.
Suggestion: screened
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in contrast, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90794979079 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51736845884 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623430962343 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5819174783 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2307692308 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210043719239 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678186253629 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478630795871 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121368740858 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546088851233 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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