some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. other say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in the cinema. discuss both views and give your opinion.
People are different and have different mentality and personality. Day after day people become more lazy, maybe this fact is due that they are exhausted or tired because of their workplace. Anyway, everybody is free to choose how to spend their relax time.
Firstly, watching films on our phones or tablets can be very useful when you are traveling, but sincerely i don't pay the same attention than when i go to the cinema. Most of the films are now one click distance, and you can choose from a large variety. If it is a rainy day or if you don't have enough money to go to the cinema or if you are just tired and want to stay more comfortable in your bad then seeing movie on your phones or your tablet is the best solution.
Secondly, i'd rather prefer to go to the cinema instead, doesn't matter if i am going alone. i think it s not so healthy to stay with your eyes in that little screen hours after hours. i agree with those who said that to be fully enjoyed movie need to be seen at the cinema. Furthermore, after a long day of work in my opinion it is more fun to go with your friends at the cinema than to stay alone in the house. this going out with your friends will cut you the feeling of anxiety and loneliness, more than that you will forget about all your problems and you will stay concentrate to understand the story of the movie. When you are at home, there are a lot of things which can disturb your focus.
To end, is more effective to enjoy the movie at the cinema even if you have to spend some money for this. i prefer to go out with my friends and have more fun than to stay in home alone.
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- some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. other say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in the cinema. discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.16242038217 5.12529762239 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14903033307 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496815286624 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5003759384 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3571428571 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246635534174 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865406629019 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785649773619 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134248830564 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881879938567 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 12.4159519038 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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