Movies being watched in mobile and tablets are becoming increasing popular. While many individuals suggest watching movies in mobiles and tablets, many still find watching movies in cinema is far more enjoying. This essay will discuss that though it is possible to watch movies in smart devices but why watching films in cinemas are far more enjoyable in its own way.
Some people chooses the way of watching films in their cellular devices owing to its portability and accessibility advantages. Usage of smart phones are becoming increasingly popular due to its plethora of functionalities. Viewing movies in personal electronic devices is time saving, easily accessible. Moreover, movies available for download or watching online has become extraordinarily famous which prevents people to spent bucks in movie theatres. For example, many mid budget cinemas are bankrupt due to facility of watching movies in devices. Movie viewing in smartphones and tablets are very user friendly, portable, accessible than watching films in cinemas.
Though, watching movies in electronic devices are common in some people but nothing can be compared to the experience a user explores inside a cinema. The visual satisfaction, sound, ambience cannot be correlate with the moderate experience of watching movies in devices. Some movies we watch are pirated too which negates the entire hard work of making a movie. For example, introduction of various technologies like IMAX, 3D for providing better experience to audience are far more accepted by audience which includes mobile users as well. Cinematic movie watching are always pleasurable and worth experiencing in compare to smart electronic devices.
Some people prefer to watching movies in mobiles and tablets while other still favours the way of watching movies in theatres. This essay discussed though experiencing movies in devices have its own benefits but it cannot overcome the advantage a film lover witnesses inside a cinema.In my opinion, I strongly suggest that experience film in movie theatre is far more superior and pleasurable to humans than watching in mobiles or tablets.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'watch'?
Suggestion: watch
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, still, well, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45921450151 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81837976199 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513595166163 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1888696482 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.9375 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140493079583 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061710489601 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443733989318 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106774846201 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181782344761 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.