Over the past two decades,countries in the world have become more and more interdependent and new technologies have erased many existing borders.Therefore, learning foreign language is very important for the people for the development of country.Some individuals believe that foreign language is just for travel to or working in a foreign country.However,Other think that there are number of reasons to learn another language.I agree with the later statement.In this essay, I will shed light on the consequences of both view points and I will discuss on my opinion also.
To commence,there are multifarious causative factors for those who think that travelling or working is the only reason to learn a new foreign language.First of all,they need to be capable of communicating with the local people. They believe that they can find jobs without any preparation of new skills because body language is good enough, but in this misunderstanding they struggle a lot and most often harassed by their Boss.Moeeover, the basic conversation is needed to ask for food, directions, go to market and so on. Again, local people also respect them because of their effort to speak foreign language.
On the other hand, there are two reasons why learn a foreign language is important. First and the foremost, it helps to explore Overseas culture and it is good to know unique about them.Therefore, it could learn the difference. Usually it helps in watching foreign movies which shows the traditional and cultura of foreign.Further, one can learn new foreign vocabulary which is good exercise for human brain. Moreover, people's memory would improve because they are taught by new words and sounds.That change would grow their self confidence.
In gist, this might be true that people learn foreign language to visit or to work there, but it is important to enhance the significant skills.So, in my opinion people should provide a little time to learn a new language.
- Sample Task 2 IELTS Writing Questions 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21202531646 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23944769842 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560126582278 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 141.146102398 49.4020404114 286% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.0 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.1111111111 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377575671071 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163742701392 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113104921279 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232500804872 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433523918363 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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