Some people say that parents have the most important role in a child’s development. However, others argue that things like television or friends have the most significant influence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is often believed that parents play the most significant role in child’s cognitive development. However, some argue that the external factors like television or peers create greater impact. In my opinion, I think that parent’s role can not be compared with any other contributing factor in child’s overall growth.
According to many people, learning starts at home and child’s moral foundation is built from the beginning of their life which is mainly influenced by parents. Offsprings are generally well receptors and acquire the knowledge of distinguishing right from wrong by the guidance of guardians. For example, the impact of parents on child’s development was highlighted in a recent news reported that about over 70 percent off drug addicted children belongs to a family where both parents are working that indicates that lack of parental guidance cause juvenile to go astray.
On the other hand, some argue that significant portion of children’s learning depends on the external factors like gadgets, TV and friends and children like to learn from outside world. An illustration off that fact can be the example of an obedient teenager from a decent family who later on his life become alcohol addicted by the impact of his friends. Television contributes immensely in child’s growth because it provides and sometimes creates trends among youths and drive them towards something good or bad.
In conclusion, although the influence of devices and peers can not be neglected as these can be vital source of good or evil for children’s learning, parents role in the overall growth of children can not be comparable as parents build the foundation of child’s learning process that direct them in their rest of lives.
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- Some people say that parents have the most important role in a child’s development. However, others argue that things like television or friends have the most significant influence. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 100
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36428571429 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99305318144 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585714285714 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.8421185656 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.2 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236185858667 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104667133761 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836133072302 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156435276574 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104724808689 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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