Some people say that people remember special gifts or presents that they receive. Why do you think that is?
Some people fee that person do not forget the presents which they received from others. I completely agree with this notion. Firstly, I think it is because of emotional attachment with the person and secondly it is interconnected with their special occasion. This essay will discuss both the points in the details in the paragraphs.
The primary reason why i believe that folks think of these presents most of the time is because of the relationship with the person who gifted it to them. The individual who buy any thing to gift them has some feelings attached to that one when he purchase it from market for them. This connects them when they gift it to them. For example , Amir khan, most popular bollywood actor shared his feelings on the TV show that salman khan gifted bike to him in 2001 and he still keeps it in the same condition after so long time because of the friendship between them. Attached emotions with the gifts are the major thing which we recall when we consider that.
Another reason why we do recall these is because we receive gifts on the particular moments and these days are associated with our main part of life. When we memorize these events then we think about these things is because we have received that on our special day. For example, I still have the cricket bat which my dad gifted me on my 8th birthday and I really love it. So these types of celebrations and the presents connected us with the emotions of our friends or family members who gives it to us which we can not forget until we alive.
Agglomerating all the facts, I would like to ingeminate that human beings have more ability to remember emotions rather than the things so all the gifts which our known one gifts us have the thoughts attached to it. I also think that these presents have the memories of our loved ones in it which we can not deny.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 21.0 7.30460921844 287% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 69.0 24.0651302605 287% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53273809524 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32013703553 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494047619048 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6567470675 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.533333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184222929639 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068957095441 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675739974505 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116267147887 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403275203804 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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