It's a bit strange question. There are many factors which kind in the world
However, some people contend that parents do not play a vital role in triumphs of their children. If the parents really wanted their children be successful person, they have to do everything for them. Everyone knows that all children need for our future
If parents don't have enough money to study their children in a good schools they should help them to study in public schools.
In addition, I can say there are a lot great parents in the world.
Finally, I would like to say I agree this idea and I think that parents are the one who inspired the most the children. Since childhood, children follow their parents as a rule and want to become like them. Therefore,it is visible that children's success are significantly depend on how they brought up their parents.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: rekharastogi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...are many factors which kind in the world However, some people contend that parent...
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...eople contend that parents do not play a vital role in triumphs of their childre...
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...ontend that parents do not play a vital role in triumphs of their children. If t...
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...ted their children be successful person, they have to do everything for them. Eve...
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...ws that all children need for our future If parents dont have enough money to stu...
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...ildren need for our future If parents dont have enough money to study their childr...
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...hat childrens success are significantly depend on how they brought up their parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, really, so, therefore, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 698.0 1615.20841683 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 149.0 315.596192385 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68456375839 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4256708566 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651006711409 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 506.74238477 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2928817645 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.25 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184449274073 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841185520907 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520799348261 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877865201818 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638162121765 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 78.4519038076 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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