Some people think advance technology such as the Internet is a powerful source of information. Others, however, think that books are also a good source of information and entertainment. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples.
Technology is widely used throughout the world. Because of its quick accessibility, it has become the fastest source of exchange of information in modern world. But, on the other side, some people think that books are also good source of information as well as entertainment which I also agree with this statement due to the following reason.
Internet has become more acceptable nowadays for its enormous advantages. First of all, Information on every subject is imaginable here. You can get any information of your interest like information about any subject without going out of your home at very low cost. Secondly, by social media like Facebook, Snap Chat, Twitter etc. you can connect to the world and can exchange knowledge and ides across the world. However, we cannot also ignore the downside to this growing technology. The major drawback of internet is that there is a lot of wrong information and Pornographic materials which target the young generation too easily.
Books, on the other side, are one of the most popular forms of self development and entertainment. It play vital role in children and adults development, because it approve your ability to focus, retain information, think better and concentrate. If you want to be more successful and you want to grow, then you need to learn and focus, and reading has got all these crucial areas of development and more, covered. Besides, it is also a stellar source of entertainment. There are so many interesting books like historical books, comics, poetry and others which not only entertain us but also expand and develop our own mind and knowledge.
At last, Reading makes you wiser not to mention the educational and learning benefits that are gained, it is enjoyable as well as factual. Nevertheless, despite of overwhelming advantages of books, many people have lost interest in reading, some children, even find it boring as they prefer to play video games or spend all their time on their internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08868501529 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80718287558 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60244648318 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1658446161 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8823529412 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289745970868 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07824361703 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873509434969 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165349204507 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102790198376 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.