Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help local community.
The believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole.
Do you agree or disagree?
It has been widely assumed that all students should be forced to do volunteer works in their spare time to help the local residents. Also, many believes that this would be beneficial for both sides. In my perspective, I partially agree with this idea.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why unpaid job is advantageous for both teenagers and society as a whole. The main short coming í that teenager may obtain a lot of real experience about their society through unpaid works. For instance, working at Hanoi Youth club-an volunteer organization which offer free tours for foreign tourists- enable their member to have a real conversation with foreigners, which allows them to enhance their English ability. Furthermore, volunteer work also might save up an enormous sum of budget which is used for wages of the workforce. This could allow authorities to spend that money to strengthen the welfare of local community.
On the other hand, it seems that unpaid job somehow has negative impacts on the develop of adolescents and freedom of society. Firstly, it is obvious that the pressure of study account for a great deal of how teenagers spend their spare time. They are usually required to be attended at the lectures and complete a huge workload of assignments. If they were forced to do unpaid jobs, they would be prone to encounter stress and depression. Secondly, it also go against goes against the ideal of constitution and human rights when a group of people is required to do volunteer work, especially it may be against their will.
It goes without saying that, although volunteer works may offer a wide range of benefit for youngsters and community but I am completely against the ideal of making it compulsory.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 126, Rule ID: SHORT_COMING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'shortcoming'?
Suggestion: shortcoming
...nagers and society as a whole. The main short coming í that teenager may obtain a lot of rea...
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Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...aid job somehow has negative impacts on the develop of adolescents and freedom of society. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92832764505 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66062792047 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60409556314 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3191066612 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.142857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328316364756 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102277126353 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064108703912 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181824016825 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981769463304 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.