Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help local community. They believe this would benefit both individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Many people assume that voluntary job </span>should be<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> a compulsion for youngsters. While I agree </span>can be <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">beneficial for both the </span>individual<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> and society as a whole, I believe thatobligation is unequal.
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<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">On the one hand, I agree there are several reasons why unpaid job is advantageous for both teenagers and society as a whole.The main adequacy is that teenager may accumulate real experiences and valuable skills for their future career through unpaid works. In addition, those accomplishments emphasize specific professional capabilities and utilize experience summaries, which are necessary for pursuing higher education and career promotion. Eventually, this is one way to save money for society's budget to invest in public welfare.</span>
On the other hand, I would argue force goes against the values of a free and fair society. The first reason is that complying with the non-profit programs to do unpaid works may cause resentment and misunderstanding about volunteering job. Moreover, overwhelming pressure of studying at school requires a great deal of free time spending on sports and relaxation. In other words, students are busy enough with many assignments that need to be perfectly completed.
In conclusion, while compulsion certainly affects teenagers’ intention of doing voluntary works, I do not believe that pressure outweighs all other motivators.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...r both teenagers and society as a whole.The main adequacy is that teenager may accu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.38636363636 5.12529762239 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.56009233994 2.80592935109 163% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663636363636 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1411507682 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.111111111 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8888888889 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184352869901 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796869418666 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550558161586 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12452004076 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421506674152 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.08 12.4159519038 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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