In the history of mankind studying has had a crucial role toward finding a good job, some people concur that it is on universities shoulder to creat a knowledgeable and skillful circumstances for their students before experiencing workplace, while others have adverse attitudes toward this and believe that university should only ease their access through knowledge. This essay will be supporting the first stand point and mentions better job opportunities and assist the development of a country as the possible reasons.
To begin with, studying and gaining tertiary education has always been useful among people who were searching for a decent job, in addition universities are the best environment to grow students with precious values and raise them with suitable knowledge and they can be qualify in their field of interest. First of all should offer various courses which are in need for the society after that by selecting people who can be matched and can put both effort and determination to grow; they have passed half of the way , meanwhile by giving them projects and mentoring them how to behave in different situations, they can acquire great experience and accustom for a better future. An article which was published recently illustrates that about 50 percent of students and pupils were not content with the education facilities.
Moreover, studying has became prior option of numerous people in order to find a safe and adequate occupation to secure their family’s future. By providing a path for people to study or enhance their knowledge and wisdom, they are planning to help the future. To be specific if a country set a plan for their needs and careers that are vital in a way to improve country’s situation among other countries, firstly they are helping their citizens to work and prevent them from further problems and illnesses such as : stress, depression. Secondly as long as they have their own citizens to work for them they will become less independent to other countries and ultimately its a far-reaching plan with a fantastic consequence.
To sum up, not inly studying has been beneficial and had a direct affect on our social behavior and morality but also had been improving a country’s position among other countries. If the government could invest on their youngsters it would be a great phenomenon to prevent their country from huger crisis.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...revent their country from huger crisis.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, such as, first of all, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10485933504 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77457085567 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570332480818 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.0208384593 49.4020404114 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.454545455 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.5454545455 20.7667163134 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8181818182 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239203387085 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886372057624 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439629404966 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138912902167 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444058775719 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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