There is a debate weather art is that much important or not to be taught as a main subject in schools. Some believe that art should be learnt as a mandatory subject while others, myself included, think that it is a misuse of the crucial period of student life, and should be leave to the willingness of the students.
On the one hand, considering art as a mandatory subject in school can be a hamper to the main subjects. To illustrate, art require too much time and afford to be learnt. So, students have to spent huge amount of time in this subject and they will not get enough time for other important subjects. As a result of this, they will not be able to prepare for their examination and they will fail in exams. Furthermore, art is a special thing and it needs so many items which cannot be learnt and affordable to all students. For example, if a student wants to art something he have to purchase lots of art papers, colors, pencils, and also have to invest the most important thing, a huge amount of time. Some parents usually are not capable of managing such amount of money. Therefore, if we make it compulsory, it may cause falls of poor students and leaving a major proportion of students uneducated.
On the other hand, art is a way to illustrate own creativeness and thoughts to the world. If we give a blank paper with some colors and pencils to a child, he will definitely write something from his mind. Consequently, we can find something new and atracing thing to show. In addition, It is a great through to have a famous artists like Leonardo da vinci, Jaynul Abedin. If a child practise art from his childhood along side his study, he could be an expert in this field, and we would have the future greatest artists.
To conclude, though teaching art at school can gift us the greatest artists, there is a chance to hamper the main study and illiteracy for costly items.So, i think it should be left of the choice of a student and his family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: leaved; left
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Suggestion: has
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Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are usually
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Suggestion: alongside
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Suggestion: So
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48333333333 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5479294426 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513888888889 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3261197922 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201785474759 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636713646715 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467556769168 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124385337998 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312234434433 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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