Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The idea of increasing the minimum legal age for people using vehicles like car or motorbike is the best way to raise the safe transportation. I definitely agree with this idea and discuss it in my essay below.
The raise of age for vehicle users is very necessary for government because it can help people who want to own a driver's liscence to accumulate experience when they are a teenager to take part in examination. Especially there are many of accidents occuring due to driving careless, much of them are people who are under 18s. Therefore, people need to learn traffic law carefully before they have enough age to joint traffic.
Additionally, increasing the number of age participating traffic is also a good way to decline environmental pollution is an urgent problem to government across a global and transportation is one of the reason for it. In fact, cars and motorbikes throw out environment smoke which lead to air pollution. Take Vietnam for example, there are many vehicles got in stuck at the highest time in big cities which affect seriously to environment.
In conclusion, I think that the increase number of age to use transportation is an incredible idea to reduce accidents. Governments in many of nations should apply this way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93867924528 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99820463662 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627358490566 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6643010211 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.7 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236970098152 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859787626145 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781377588833 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143991882386 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647150915103 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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