Some people think that the best way to stay fit is by joining a gym, while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is sufficient.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Daily exercise is essential to stay strong and healthy with today’s busy lifestyle. It is believed that exercises may be the successor to fitness. Therefore, some may believe attending a fitness centre is more beneficial than the activities we do throughout the day, such as using stairs, walking or cooking. In this essay, I would agree with those who argue that it is adequate to perform daily chores.
Firstly, since the last decayed gyms seem to be ubiquitous and thought to be accessing them might provide one, with structured and technically advanced exercises to stay strong. In a typical centre, individuals can take the use of various types of equipment and tools, which suit your workout. There are professional instructors, who can instruct you to perform the exercises correctly and effectively. Moreover, it seems like a place to greet the community. The argument goes that if just by performing daily activities only, people will lose the opportunity to undertake proper exercising routines.
However, innumerable people might incapable to take the assistance of a gym due to lack of leisure time and luxury spare money to be spent on. In the fast-moving world, many busy with their professions and have inadequate spare time for the exercises. Therefore getting the most out of an active lifestyle is more practical than a trip to a gym. For example, using the office stairs rather than taking the elevator, washing your car, at home or even cleaning your garden will supply the daily dose of exercise. Furthermore, it allows free of charge fitness activities more naturally, Therefore, this is the significant natural way of assisting people to maintain their vigour.
In conclusion, although it is suitable for enrolling in a gym to be physically well, I feel daily activities will give adequate strength to stay active and healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, i feel, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14851485149 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83415541336 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617161716172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4268424701 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15641114653 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454935107531 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446787085185 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961156247745 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241831209366 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.