Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In society, inmates of prisons are kept in captivity and are not allowed to be part of society for their crimes. A part of the population believes that convicts should serve the community without remuneration instead of their prison sentence. I completely agree with this school of thought.
Juvenile delinquents and prisoners should be classified by threat levels to society and made to do community work as part of their punishment. Additionally, governments could possibly give this as an option to the other inmates as an attempt for prisoners to reduce their sentence. For instance, people convicted of burglary and misdemeanors should be allowed to give back to society and earn their freedom as it is a victimless crime.
Alternatively, the nation and its federal government could pay the prisoners for working and serving the community but deny access to it until they have completed their sentence. This could be an incentive for a prisoner to earn capital to be able to set them up well after they are set free.
Furthermore, the prisons are facing a problem of accommodating so many criminals due to the ever increasing crimes committed. Community service as an alternative to accommodating prisoners in jails could be the resolution.
In conclusion, I am in complete agreement that prisons should be for the dangerous criminals whereas other smaller crimes should be punished with community service. Having said that, community service should be given using high discretion and must be granted on a case by case basis.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95572935162 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7315469642 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.916666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274796785266 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113041457432 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706910564355 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159788727527 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441848261072 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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