In recent years, some citizens have strong believe that the crime elimination can be achieved by the coroporation between society and its authority while others think that it is a permanent issue which attaches with the human-being from the past to the future.From my own perspective,I agree with the opinion of those others since living in places with no crime is imposible to achieve and it may necessary to operate our world.
On the one hand, the existence of crime may benefit some aspects of life.Police and justice systems are good example of what illigal activities facilitates significantly.The process from arresting the offenders, giving sentences and putting them into prisons has created a tremendous opportunities ,which are known as ‘job security’ for those who work in judical systems.If there were not any criminals to be commited,a great number of people would become unemployed.
On the other hand, an ideal society in which people treat nice to each other and absence of illigal actions is hard to attain.Taking a brief into ancient times, we can notice that even for thousands of years flowing throw, there were always the apperance of crime from the less serious like pick porketing to the severe one like killing each others and even kings in the past.Therefore, the situations are likely to repeat itself in present and later on.Moreover, the criminal activities may come from the inner part of a human being like jealous or angry personaities.As a result, every generation has to deal with new crime caused by new-born communities without any signs of disapearing.
In conclusion, crime is bad but play an essencial roles that people cannot ignore or eliminate it completely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1654676259 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91969356738 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636690647482 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 20.2975951904 340% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 209.964282677 49.4020404114 425% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 359.0 106.682146367 337% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.5 20.7667163134 335% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.5 7.06120827912 347% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255004457122 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137466460719 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677565131808 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137466460719 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677565131808 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.7 13.0946893788 288% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.02 50.2224549098 -14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.3001002004 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.89 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.43 8.58950901804 133% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.1190380762 293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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