Some people think that computer games are bad for children by all means while other believe that these games are contributing to children development.
With the rise Mordenization,a man has transformed his life tremendously. They has progressed from walking forefooted in the jungless to take first steps on the moon.Neverthless, there are some issue which remain irrelevant and as complex as ever.for instance,the given topic assert that computer games are contributing to children development?good or bad! Though this essay, i shall explore the dimensions of this topic through explain and assert and shape up my opinion by the end.
In one side of the argument there are people who belive that playing computer games improve the hand eye co-odination.children can lean various and visible attention skill.the focuse abilities of children should increase.they gain lot of knowledge about it.children can also increase concentrate level.they aslo have the sharp memory. They learn the lesson of multitasking.
On the another hand,it is also possible to make opposing case.it is often argued that children who playing vedio game they increase many health decease.they also do not concentrat their study.they do not want to play outdoor activities.they become more lazy.family connection has alos very week.they do not share any thing. They alway take heritage to express our opinion.
Nevertheless,weighing both the option,i believe that there is no single conclusion, still,i take this ground that an effective clop require both use of hand with in the limit so that it may not effect the facets of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41850220264 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32399216409 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696035242291 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.503537608 49.4020404114 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.714285714 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4285714286 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171659593466 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592578314733 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725756536534 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962050592396 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626744229041 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.