Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think that people should be free to choose. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Throughout the world, people of all ages play a plethora of games. Whereas some people opine that the government should prohibit some dangerous sports, others argue that an individual should be given the freedom to play any sports. In this essay, I shall refer to some general studies and examples to discuss both the opinions and my perspective.
To begin with, although sports are considered to be beneficial for one's fitness and proper growth both mentally and physically, several sports could be precarious for the players. In other words, games such as wrestling and car racing could cause severe injuries or could be a threat to life. For instance, a study by the National Sports Academy claims that about 10 to 12 percent of players lost their lives in car-racing, and approximately twenty wrestlers get handicapped each year because of harsh treatment, during matches, by their counterparts. Thus, it is incontrovertible that such sports could lead to various dangers for a lifetime.
However, if professional training would be given to the beginners in dangerous games, the casualties could be prevented. Therefore, giving freedom of choice to people in selecting their favorite sports activity. This is necessary for a sense of gratification for those who are genuinely interested in these sports. To exemplify, a survey conducted by the Times has found that sportsmen, who follow their passion and choose a sport of their preference achieve ameliorated success than the ones whose interests lie elsewhere. In short, self-determination is important for achievements in games.
To conclude, admittedly, some sports could be hazardous, which is why proper training by professionals is a necessity to curb such situations that jeopardize the lives of sportsmen. Moreover, the equipment as well as costumes should be designed following the risk assessment. In my opinion, banning players from playing some sports is not an efficient and fair measure to avoid the problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for instance, in short, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32802547771 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01832375789 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601910828025 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3974614461 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.533333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297497316264 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932462080008 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685567214777 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183495494434 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713051269148 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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