Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country’s success, while others think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country’s success. What are these factors? And among them, which one is more important than others?
economic growth is the top-notch parameter used by developing and developed nations in order to showcase the achievements of country. however, employment rate, illiteracy and health rate are the significant point which need to be considered while measuring the growth of a nation. this essay intends to elucidate this phenomenon in the upcoming paragraphs.
To embark upon, gross domestic product is calculated based upon the trade relation of nations with others and it dramatically depend upon the strong business structure in the country. Therefore, economic progress which is reflection of gross domestic product cannot paint out the clear picture of the country’s progress. For instance, a recent study by “Business Today” magazine reveals that despite the “Yemen” has strong economy to support the financial structure, but it has not achieved anything in western world.
On the contrary to this, healthcare system represents the wellbeing of individuals in that country, if people would be free from the chronic diseases, they can better contribute to the success of the country. Secondly, educational rate is another prime factor to be considered which determine the skilled men and women availability in that nation. Thirdly, employment rate has considerable importance dur to the reason that if there will be unemployment people will not get food and shelter to survive and that leads to failure of that nation on economic front.
however, health rate is the indispensable factor which should be considered over all the aforementioned arguments. Because, if people of a nation are unhealthy and caught by deadly diseases, then there will be nobody to contribute towards education, employment, and economic growth.
To recapitulate, although, economic progress is used to measure country’s success, nobody cannot neglect the health care services provided by that nation for growth county’s success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, well, while, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73720136519 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12395773484 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566552901024 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7921443974 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.083333333 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29226277167 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977517197991 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708128264018 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157993924604 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626273209869 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.