Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
there is no doubt that most of the people nowadays are striving to enhance their quality of life. Therefore, there is a highly debate about the best practice to do so. some individuals in fact believe that the highly effective method to evolve their lives is by practicing sports, while other people find the diet is the key of healthier life. this topic is arguably the most interesting topic and I strongly believe that the combination of both views will be the best way to improve our life.
To begin with, it’s irrefutable that daily physical activities are very significant for all people at any age. Firstly, it relieves many people’s stress during their day. To illustrate, a plethora of studies have shown the great impact of sports on people’s behaviour. Since, it triggers some hormone that boost the mode. Secondly, practicing various kind of sports will boost individuals’s health. Undoubtedly plenty of dangerous diseases have attributed to the low physical activities. Take obesity as an example, this fatal disorder exacerbates people’s health by stimulating other diseases such as diabetes and hypertension. Nevertheless, adequate diet is playing a crucial factor in developing people health. For instance, people need certain healthy diet to raise their stamina during the workout.
On the flip side, it’s undeniable fact, that diet variation is the critical factor in having healthier life. First of all, a large number of food unfortunately are lacked from vital ingredients that contribute mainly in people’s health. Moreover, these kind of food might influence on the normal metabolism pattern for individuals. Nonetheless, mixing both habits might enhance human fitness as well as avert them form many diseases.
To sum up, having a better healthy life is the most concerning issue these days, as, some of people refer this matter to exercising sports whereas others believe that the diet is the merely key for that. However, I wholeheartedly believe that combination of both methods will be extremely helpful and impact positively on our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38554216867 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93632990551 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578313253012 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4128720054 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1052631579 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4736842105 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9473684211 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229089249528 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065531394777 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05247260776 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135727875661 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253980988316 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.