Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention, while others believe it is responsibility of the individuals to protect themselves.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
One group of people assume that the government has obligation to protect its citizens against criminal activity. Meanwhile, the opponents argue that every person should take responsibility for his own safeness. In this essay, I will consider both sides of the argument and then I will give my own opinion.
On the one side of the argument are those who believe that the government is responsible for crime prevention. To support their opinion they would appeal to basic human right, in particular one of them declares, “Everyone has the right to life, liberty and security of person”. Thus, the authorizes should provide safe environment in a country, where everyone including children, the elderly, disable people, anyone who cannot protect themselves would feel safe. In addition, citizens pay taxes and it is expected that part of them will be spending on security and protection. Otherwise, if the country are not able to protect its habitats, nobody will not be willing to live in it.
On the other side supporters of self-guard idea would argue that every individual should be in charge of his own safeness. This is because some people tend to behave recklessly, thoughtlessly without considering consequences of their actions. For example, one my acquaintances was raped by group of males while was staying with them alone and drinking alcohol. As well as some people against safety reasons let to strangers to come in their homes or give them personal information about family members. It goes without saying that the government is not able to protect them in these kinds of cases.
In conclusion, both sides of the argument have their merits, on balance however, I believe that the government should be responsible for law enforcement and prevention of crimes in the country, while citizens should take responsibility for their own safeness as well as.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19672131148 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86757629696 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547540983607 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4969277019 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.214285714 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349538254186 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110409696687 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951772440024 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22149385611 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615706150962 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.