Some people think that the government should establish free library in each town other believe that it is a waste of money. Since people can access the internet at home to obtain information.
In recent times one of the most debated issue related to making a free libraries by government. For human kind of the town some assert that the library has the ocean of the knowledge because of there are lot of books related to all field while, the others contend that the In the latest trend all people have smartphone so they easily access information from internet. However, I strongly believe that the both option are right on their place.
On the one side,of the argument there are people who reason that building a library is the educate educated Idea. First and foremost, making a library is a good thing because many people go into the library for reading a types of books. They gain their knowledge from them. For example, many people cannot afford the expensive books, but they can easily read books in library. The second point in this context is that the library is the only one place where people can read in peacefully second example, many people do not feel please in their homes while they go into the library for complete the task. Moreover, a lot of people go there for competitive or important exam.
On the other hand, the other group believe that the in the digital Era there is a no requirement of physical book room. According to them, in latest train crowd are use their smartphone. They can access all the information from anywhere and anytime in their place. For example, many cities and believe that why they take a burden of bunch of books while they can get information on internet more ever they can mark that the topic on book and write a comment on their topic. The second point in this context is that establishing library has huge cost and it take a huge space from the town. Day by day population has increased and space as the biggest issue of the world.
To conclude,In my opinion today's generation are smart and they always preferred smart things although, the investing in libraries is important question for all. Thus both the argument seems logical and appropriate and I equally agree to them.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'library'?
Suggestion: library
... debated issue related to making a free libraries by government. For human kind of the to...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me assert that the library has the ocean of the knowledge because of there are lo...
^^
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , of
...ight on their place. On the one side,of the argument there are people who reaso...
^^^
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e who reason that building a library is the educate educated Idea. First and foremost, maki...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a type' or simply 'types'?
Suggestion: a type; types
... people go into the library for reading a types of books. They gain their knowledge fro...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the latest'.
Suggestion: in the latest
... physical book room. According to them, in latest train crowd are use their smartphone. T...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 558, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
...tablishing library has huge cost and it take a huge space from the town. Day by day ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 601, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e a huge space from the town. Day by day population has increased and space as th...
^^
Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , In
...gest issue of the world. To conclude,In my opinion todays generation are smart ...
^^^
Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion are smart and they always preferred smart things although, the investing in ...
^^
Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ibraries is important question for all. Thus both the argument seems logical and app...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, moreover, second, so, thus, while, for example, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67867036011 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35176303198 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487534626039 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8203111045 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3529411765 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2352941176 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235050853292 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709716921111 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540484996857 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13506377031 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697610336726 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'library'?
Suggestion: library
... debated issue related to making a free libraries by government. For human kind of the to...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me assert that the library has the ocean of the knowledge because of there are lo...
^^
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , of
...ight on their place. On the one side,of the argument there are people who reaso...
^^^
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e who reason that building a library is the educate educated Idea. First and foremost, maki...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a type' or simply 'types'?
Suggestion: a type; types
... people go into the library for reading a types of books. They gain their knowledge fro...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the latest'.
Suggestion: in the latest
... physical book room. According to them, in latest train crowd are use their smartphone. T...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 558, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
...tablishing library has huge cost and it take a huge space from the town. Day by day ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 601, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e a huge space from the town. Day by day population has increased and space as th...
^^
Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , In
...gest issue of the world. To conclude,In my opinion todays generation are smart ...
^^^
Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion are smart and they always preferred smart things although, the investing in ...
^^
Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ibraries is important question for all. Thus both the argument seems logical and app...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, moreover, second, so, thus, while, for example, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67867036011 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35176303198 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487534626039 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8203111045 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3529411765 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2352941176 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235050853292 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709716921111 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540484996857 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13506377031 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697610336726 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.