Nowadays people’s interest in the field of Arts is depleting. Numerous amount of civilians give an opinion that the government authorities must pass a budget for the individuals of the society contributing to artistic fields such as musicians, painters, sculptors and other such departments of art. My opinions and explanations regarding this is discussed in the following paragraphs.
There are ample amount of groups of civilians following their legacies given by their ancestors in the field of arts but these is deteriorating as these artists don’t get economical support from the officials. Due to this various consequences are produced such as less people prefer to join Arts as they believe there are very less scope to master in this department. For instance, many years ago in the era of Rajputanas and other kings used to appreciate the masterpieces of various artists round the world and used to reward. Also they used to prize great musicians and sculptors visiting their castles. This motivated individuals to give all the efforts to become the best. However, these days youngsters are not getting support from the officials which decrease their interest in various forms of Arts.
There are several reasons for the authorities to support Art and provide fund to institutes running programs related to different art forms. First and foremost reason is that by promoting cultural art programs in which massive rewards are given to the talented pupils will not only increase their interest to participate but also preserve the culture of the area they represent. For example, National awards such as ‘Padma Shree’ is given to the renowned dancers, musicians of the nation by the minister which motivates the young generations to do such worthwhile things which makes themselves proud as well as the nation.
Secondly, many people from various nations come to have a glance of live performances of the artists which will eventually benift the overall economy of the nation. Moreover, it will also increase the pride of nation throughout the world.
To pen down in nutshell, I agree with the group of individuals that think that the government should encourage the individuals opting to master various form of Arts by offering them scholarships and also reward the individuals who achieves excellence in these fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.296 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84250406039 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.6555334007 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.4 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12624445131 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384440950485 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444076673583 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745057344228 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392565435301 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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