Some people think that the government should pay one of the parents of very young children to stay at home to look after their children.
What do you think would be the advantages and disadvantages of this policy?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some people believe that one of the parents with kids should be funded by government so that, they could accomplish their day-to-day needs. There are plenty of advantages of this development but it would be a strenuous effort to accommodate enormous number of families.
In many countries vast majority of parents fail to fulfil everyday needs of their children due to various reasons. Some parents cannot give proper attention to their kids due to the reason that they both have to work and hectic routine prevents them to take good care of young ones. Therefore, some people opine that support at government level could be effective to cope with this situation.
To begin with advantages, it would be beneficial for grooming of kids if one the parents stays home and look after them. Secondly, attention and time spent on them will be helpful in the development of positive behavior and manners in adolescent. Furthermore, money funded by the government could be spent to fulfill educational and health needs of children as well as to run everyday circle of life.
On the other side of coin, there are some disadvantages too. Firstly, it would be a herculean task for a government to compensate families if a country is populous because it will be a burden on the economy. Secondly, if both parents are professional and want to work in their respective fields one of them have to sacrifice his/her time to stay at home with kids.
To recapitulate, it would be advantageous if government pays one of the parents to watch their children as they need devotion and care from parents. Additionally money could help them to bear out daily expenses.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 150, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...ey need devotion and care from parents. Additionally money could help them to bear out daily...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => OK
Chars per words: 4.925 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75523388762 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528571428571 0.561755894193 94% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9691049083 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.076923077 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335988792622 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115923879236 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670477818396 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191688360544 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00740289023447 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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