some people think that government should spend money to protect the wild animals which are endangered but others think that extinction of wild animals is a natural phenomena and thus government should not waste money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
it is true that some people think that goverment should spend money to protect the wild animals which are endangered but others think that extinction of wild animals is a natural phenomena and the goverment should not spend money. I completely agree with the first statement because it has more advantage rather than disadvantage for some reasons.
In the one hand, the merit of goverment use money to protect the wild animals which are endangered is great choice to protect the balance of ecosystem in word wide. It is because ecosystem stability will be able to make our environment healthier than before. For example we can look at the wild animals as indicator the environmental, such as in the past there is a bunch of beautiful butterfly fly around our neighborhood which is one of indication of air quality decreases. Others example is we can compare both of fish stock in the past and in the present, it show the water quality in the river. As result we will get a lot of benefit from our desire to protect wild animals.
however there are some drowbacks evironment if we think doesn't matter anymore thet extinction of wild animals is a natural phenomena than less effort to resolve this situation seriously. Firstly the wild animals will be extinct causing new problem. For example pest in rice fields such as rats are increasing in number because of snakes as the highest level in the food chain are extinct. Secondly the next generation can't see javanese tiger directly even though in the zoo. It is because uncontrol land clearing and ilegel hunting in the past.
In conclusion, I believe that the goverment and the society must be together in one perception to protect wild animals and make a conservasy as a solution of this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8178807947 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60929043258 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516556291391 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2906924798 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.923076923 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375764802178 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120059003984 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16791874701 0.0667982634062 251% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239342033761 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161928791563 0.056905535591 285% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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