Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere. What extent do you agree or not?
It is important to consider whether the government should allocate their budget on museums, music and on other art activities or not. Some people argue that they have to invest their funds on art. I am disagree with it. In my opinion, public sectors are indispensable for the growth of our nation. So, the funds of our government should be invested on these kind of sectors.
To begin with, the development of public sectors play paramount role in our nation’s growth. When government spend there wealth on these sectors namely schools, hospitals, basic services for society, it will automatically boost the economy of our country. Art, theatres and concerts are secondary because they are not fulfilling basic needs of individuals. For instance, music, movies are not providing any sort of medicine to or treatment to patients, they need to go hospital for their medicine, not in art galleries.
Furthermore, it’s rightly said that the children are the future of our nation. If they will reap good education from their educational institutions, then they would be able to do their best for society. A better education help a person to become a good human being . That’s why, it’s imperative to more focus on these sectors rather than any kind of art sectors.
To recapitulate, while other people may vary in their point of view, but I think that the executive of our nation should finance their huge amount of funds on public sectors such as on schools, health care sectors and avoid to waste their money on art galleries.
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- Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere What extent do you agree or not 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, second, so, then, while, for instance, i think, kind of, sort of, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94573643411 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67014588454 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7226064425 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1428571429 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135303091089 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453657222114 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414610153154 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870031385034 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031861793328 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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