Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
On an average count 37% of the world's population rely on their artistic work for their basic income. People with a view that the government is wasting money on arts are somehow unaware of the benefits of it. Its quite impressive when you visit a country, and a group of people with different and creative talents display their cultural art in the form of live events, shows and ornaments. Some of them are interesting enough that they became a part of your memory or a decoration piece at home.
In my opinion the decision makers are not investing without doing a homework. There are multiple factors that affects and becomes the reason of investment in arts. For local bodies it generates multiple job opportunities, those who are creative and have a passion of doing something different, gets benefits from these governmental support. Furthermore, it represents and differentiate your country at an international level. Family can enjoy multiple festivals during weekends that helps to overcome the work or daily routine exhaustion.
On the other hand, people they do have a valid point as they see lack of investment in neccessary areas that needs to be considered with higher priority. But improper planning doesn't needs to be taken as wastage of money in a field that is quite valuable for the people and the country.
It is the responsibility of the government to manage these issues. Instead of focusing in some areas and isolating the others, and becoming the reason for chaos among the people, they should make a proper budgeting plan, considering all the aspects so that they can manage and invest in multiple fields in a proper way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... higher priority. But improper planning doesnt needs to be taken as wastage of money i...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...an manage and invest in multiple fields in a proper way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95323741007 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73162777113 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593525179856 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5419153486 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.923076923 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163894731307 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584842610438 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827622522031 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931852543971 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668180341906 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.