Some people think that governments should spend more money on sports facilities for top athletes, others argue that this money should be spent on sports facilities for ordinary people. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is true that government spand a lot of money for sports facilities, however nowadays there are more more argues about on who should the administrations spend money , some people believe that , they should be top sportsmen , others consider that it should spend on ordinary people . In my opinion , everybody should have a chance to train on great facilities.
To begin with, successful athletes should have top opportunity because with that they can improve their skills , make theirselfes better. With help of it they can win their opponents and make the country in which they live more popular. That is why government should spend money on them. For example the famous boxer Isroil Madrimov , he trains in great opportunities also he wins his opponents easily . Without that opportunities he would not have been able to win so easily , he would even have lost.
In the same time , there are so many people who think that government must spend money for everyone, that everybody should train with great facilities . The administrations should do it because with that they can encourage people to do sport. However if they do not spend money on that , there will not be a lot of successful sportsmen because if person trains on informior facilities he or she lose motivation to sport . For instance, my brother wanted to be a wrestler but when he started going to the gym he lost interest to it quickly.
In my view , there should be some gyms with the perfect opportunities for people who want to train and for it government should spend money. Most of successful athletes have enough money for training on great facilities. With it government can interest people to do sport.
In conclusion, in the future i consider that there will be too many gyms with excellent opportunities. This will bring us many benefits and we will get a lot of new athletes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in my view, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84493670886 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73369781888 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458860759494 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5793000473 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6875 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403637213695 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146052815325 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136400400191 0.0667982634062 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255815705052 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165088738469 0.056905535591 290% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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