Some people think high-end technology can prevent and cut down the rate of committing crime. Do you agree or disagree?
Technology ruled and controlled the world, people can’t live without internet, governments can’t finalize its job without technology, and many other companies as well. People believe that technology these days is obligatory, and help in reduce the rate of crimes, others think the opposite and facilitate the work of criminals.
Firstly, people are following the technology and seeing how it is facilitating and securing their lives, that’s why some people think high-technology can prevent and decrease crimes. Banks started encouraging people to use Visa Cards instead of paying cash, where it cut down the rate of thefts. Second, most shops, restaurants, install cameras and alarms to prevent robbery, and have records that aid the police to know the criminals. However, most governments use high-technology to save their records in a secure place such as clouds, to avoid any cyber-attack. For example, in Amsterdam, public transportation obliges people to buy tickets and pay with Visa Cards, where it is safer, and the employee won’t receive any cash. From my side I agree, that technology is important and keep us safe.
On the other hand, some people think that technology ruined the world, environmental and society, they disagree that it can assist in cutting down crimes. Social media is controlling our lives, and this is our mistake, we put all our moves, pictures and we share our locations online, so criminals can know where we are. Second, most people don’t know that all our data is monitored online by the governments, they can manage and know all our steps. Moreover, high-tech companies release each month new items such as mobile phones, people rush for buying it, but no one knows that these items might be monitored and easy to be hacked. For example, U.S government lately announced that Huawei company is banned in the USA due to security crimes. In my opinion I disagree, where we should use the technology to keep u safe and aid us.
Finally, for some human beings, technology is important and help to decrease crimes, others think it is destroying our society and make it vulnerable to crimes. In my opinion, I believe that technology is a must, and help to solve many crimes and save lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 656, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...d and easy to be hacked. For example, U.S government lately announced that Huawei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, moreover, second, so, well, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77224188245 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543243243243 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0450045477 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.9375 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269293144427 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920600726174 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087561936214 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164390999602 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435837485486 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.