Economic development plays very significant role in all over the world. Most of the people beleive that, if country is already well off. So, any changes regarding wealth or development does not make them happier. I agree with this statement. Even It is a debatable topic I will explain it with possible assumption.
On the first hand, nowadays, every country has developed and well settled. They can provide better facilities to their employees in the form of new schemes, new policies, job facilities and many more. Most of the people thinks that, if their country is already well established So, why they need additional changes. They also think that, if government and country want to do any changes so they can fulfill the requirement of citizen. For example, Canada is a country who provides better facilities to their citizen in the form of medical entitlement, job facilities and home shutter etc.
On the other hand, any changes in economic wealth means that, the workers will be more involved in jobs rather than private life.The timing and hours of jobs are mounting. They do extra efforts. Even the lives of worker are more stressful and the ratio of medical issue will be increase day by day.
I put in it nutshell, I pen down saying that, government should implement the best facilities to their citizen. If they are already well established country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, regarding, so, well, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96103896104 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60726123269 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7418521657 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189145745403 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724126331698 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663256111914 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112282446852 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739127649044 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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