It is irrefutable that, nowadays, mass communication medium has distracted involve in our life in the form of television and cable connection.I agree with that, just because of this issue our socail life has completed vanished.Moreover, it is fully debatable topic.I will explain my stance with valid reason.
At begin with,Television,social media is so wide spread that variety of programs.In this fast paced era people are totally involve with entertainment.Television is trying to fulfil their need with the help of different channels, morning show, newschannels and sports etc.For instances, Most of the people do job in to 9:00am to 5:00pm afterthat,they come home and starting to watch their favourite program,j ust because of that issue most of the people life has distributed because they have no time to meet their relative, friends.
On the other hand,nowadays,most of the people life have affected in to diseases in the form of diabetes, heart issue, mental stress and the reason behind it they have no physical activity.They spend most of the time in front of television.Even this kind of activity make the people more lazy lethargic and stressful.They have no social circle.Most of the time people compares irrelevant story in to real life and the result is that,they hugely involve in depression.
I put it in nutshell,I pen down saying that, balance behaviour always help you to live right direction of life.So,in my opine,I agree with this statement,Television has played very vital role in our life.Due to that reason we ignore our socail life.Even we are forgetting our lovesones,family and friends also.I think we always try to maintain our life with balance position.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for instance, i think, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49462648449 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581481481481 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 20.2975951904 330% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.4820887672 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 357.75 106.682146367 335% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.5 20.7667163134 325% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.5 7.06120827912 276% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139354420697 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844193016987 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0210504172115 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844193016987 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210504172115 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.3 13.0946893788 285% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.47 50.2224549098 7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 11.3001002004 260% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.64 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.05 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.1190380762 285% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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