Nowadays, people have very conservative thoughts about materialistic things, places, education etc. I personally beleive that we takes things in wider way, because better plans of education and infrastructure both are pillar of country development. So, I completely diagree with this statement. I think both are important for economy.
First of all, there are many factors are involved in country development. However, infrastructure is one of the them. Big and admirable buildings are the asset of the country. If government takes active part on it. So, definitely the economy of country will be boost and more tourist will be visited or travel to the country. Even, the tourist mentions good things in the world record hospitality, foods, education and so on. However, it is beneficial for country as well as government also. For instances, Burj-e- Khalifa is the true example, they promote their country in a good book.
Secondly, Education is the basic pillar of every country. If country have systematic and smart education system so, they creates good resources in the form of Imran Khan Prime Minster of Pakistan, Abdul Sattar Edhi man of humanity. So, I believe that, people and government should be invest their money and try to build strong nation.
Furthermore, Hospitals, NGOs are showing the humanity. If government and people are strong bonding in addition,
they try to support those people who are really needy or helpless. So, I beleive that the gurantee of success is 100% sure.
I put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, people and government should be think on Broder way. Everything has important in this world. Wheras it is education or building.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
...ation etc. I personally beleive that we takes things in wider way, because better pla...
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Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of education and infrastructure both are pillar of country development. So, I com...
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Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... important for economy. First of all, there are many factors are involved in c...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'them'?
Suggestion: the; them
...ment. However, infrastructure is one of the them. Big and admirable buildings are the as...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...buildings are the asset of the country. If government takes active part on it. So,...
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Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...icial for country as well as government also. For instances, Burj-e- Khalifa is the ...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
...tic and smart education system so, they creates good resources in the form of Imran Kha...
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Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'invested'?
Suggestion: invested
...e that, people and government should be invest their money and try to build strong nat...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d people are strong bonding in addition, they try to support those people who are...
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Line 10, column 82, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'thought'?
Suggestion: thought
...g that, people and government should be think on Broder way. Everything has important...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i think, in addition, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13818181818 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80813458273 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567272727273 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0590304122 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2857142857 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0952380952 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145478491843 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044184897811 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631805756639 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780782775069 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032645174993 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.64 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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