It is irrefutable that, building is an infrastructure of every country, just because of it economy has easily boost in all over the world. People's have different concept for making building. Some are talking about design and function of buildings. Others think that, outside appearance is important. I personally believe that, designing a building with proper construction is most significant tool rather than outward appearance.
At begin with, Why design of buildings are more important? I put in to two segments, Firstly, Building is an identification of certain places and mode of design is help out to appropriate right direction. For example, tremendous amount of shopping mall is open in various places, every shop has different designs for customer attraction and try to focus on target customers. It is a good way of selling and easy to earn maximum profit just because of design. That's why many branded companies have worked on it in the form of AL-KARAM, KHADDI, J. and they are improving their market impression in society.
Secondly, Different estate agencies and constructors are making new designs in the form of house, shopping mall instead cinema. It is a great way of attraction, For instances, In yesteryear, Pakistan established same amount of manufacturing in the forms of apartments, single story houses and many more. However, now the level of construction or manufacturing have developed and people are designing their house in advance level. just like one unit house, using wood work and mirror work etc,
Furthermore, outward appearances should be good but most important part in a building is that, it is most convenient, comfortable, strong infrastructure because most of the family live there. So, It should be good for safety purpose.
I put in it nutshell, I pen down saying that, both are important zone for make a building but according to my point of view, building designs and functions are more important rather than outdoor appearance.
- A friend you made while you studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him her Write a letter to this friend In your letter tell your friend 86
- An increasing number of the children are overweight could result many problems when they grow older both in term of their health and health care costs.why do you think so many children are overweight?what could be done to solve this problem? 84
- You are going to spend your vacation in a city in a foreign country. You have never been there before. Your cousin has a friend who lives there. Write a letter to the friend. In your letter•Introduce yourself•Say why you are making this trip•Ask som 81
- You work a part-time job in a company and the company posted an advert seeking a person for a full-time position. Write a letter to your manager requesting to apply for the advertised position. In your letter say– Why do you want to apply?– What are y 78
- Farmers within a country are often protected by tariffs that is special taxes on imported food Such policy are necessary and should be implemented wherever possible To what extend do you agree with this 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'boosted'.
Suggestion: boosted
..., just because of it economy has easily boost in all over the world. Peoples have dif...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
... maximum profit just because of design. Thats why many branded companies have worked ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...anufacturing in the forms of apartments, single story houses and many more. Howev...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...truction or manufacturing have developed and people are designing their house in ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Just
...designing their house in advance level. just like one unit house, using wood work an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.209375 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97042551403 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9025541933 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0588235294 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202019259274 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629851522481 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687191820583 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122094009027 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626849141484 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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