Dear Mr. Ahmed,
Hope this letter find you radiant health and best spirit. My name is Zara noor, I am an export manager in S.S organization of Karachi branch. I am writing this letter just because of, I need leave from 22-Jan-2019 till 22-Feb-2019.
There are many reasons, Firstly my marriage has been fixed on 24-Jan-2019 in Islamabad at Taj Hotel. However, my whole family members and in-laws are living there. They take all the responsibility during my absence. Now, my shopping is instead remaining. On the other hand, i have no brother so, I can help out to my parents.
After, the wedding I have planned world tour with my husband and you know that, It is most precious moment of life. So, I really want to enjoy it. I send you my schedule of leaves through email along with this letter. I hope you will approve my leave and give me confirmation message.
If, you have any query regarding this letter. So you can contact me on 0004545526536.
Thanks for your kind behavior, I really fond of you.
Yours Sincerely,
Zara Noor,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, really, regarding, so, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71739130435 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58437485357 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.70652173913 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4025485349 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.25 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.5 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 4.34317383033 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245226017012 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787824253182 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752559864751 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148973546078 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752987916103 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.91 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.