Dear Sam,
Hope this letter give you best spirits and radiant health. I received your letter yesterday and I am feeling joy just because of your contact. I would like to share some of the most recent activity in my country through this email instead YouTube links.
Firstly, the election result 2019 has been announced and you will feel too much happy because In the first time, in Pakistan Imran Khan has won the election and become a Prime Minster of Pakistan. I know that, you like Imran Khan being a person and his professionalism regarding country and people.
Another news is that, Pak- indo immense issue has not resolved yet. There are so many critical stage and Pakistan want that it has been disclosed in positive manner I mean to say that without war.
Furthermore, the corruption rate has reduced rather than previous year. Even, most of the orginization is introducing new protective techniques regarding fake account and different kind of documentation.
So, I would like to mention here, there are plethora amount of changes are happening during this year.
If you would like to know any futher information. I will share with you. Contact me on my personal number 009765433556.
Yours sincerely,
Sara.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er news is that, Pak- indo immense issue has not resolved yet. There are so many ...
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Line 8, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ective techniques regarding fake account and different kind of documentation. ...
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Line 10, column 54, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...ike to mention here, there are plethora amount of changes are happening during this ye...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nges are happening during this year. If you would like to know any futher infor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, regarding, so, i mean, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03902439024 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63378497973 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678048780488 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4476599609 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7857142857 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6428571429 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151879817884 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528588308085 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701748836142 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528056578067 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665841121565 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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