You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
• describe a news story in your country
• explain why people are interested in it
• say how the story personally relates to you
Dear Sam,
Hope this letter finds you in good health. It feels really good getting in touch with old friends through social media. Thanks to new technology that lets people connect with old connections. I read your email in which you were very curious to know about the current hyped news in my country. Well, let me reveal the truth and share this exciting news with you. I am so glad to share this news with you that with recent elections in my country, my desired nominated person has been elected as prime minister of Pakistan. Yes ! Mr. Imran Khan, has been selected as our new PM. I have been supporting him and his party for a decade now and I am a strong believer that with his leadership our country will progress speedily. Believe me when I say, this is the most unexpected new circulating in my country at the moment. Every single person, supporting or non-supporting the party is stunned with election results. The election result has shown that undoubtedly, it is masses who chose the fate of any country. People are thrilled including me and looking forward for a better Pakistan. Despite of all corrupt leaders and parties and mishandling of votes, a good leader has been selected to rule the country. I am quite emotional writing this that now; our country is in safe hands. I have been following this person for a good long time and been one of his major critics as well but I never leave my faith in him.
I am sure, you would be happy knowing it too. Looking forward to your detailed response and views over this drastic political turn,
Yours Sincerely,
Samantha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, Hope this letter finds you in good healt...
^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ll but I never leave my faith in him. I am sure, you would be happy knowing it ...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... views over this drastic political turn, Yours Sincerely, Samantha
^^^
Line 4, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...astic political turn, Yours Sincerely, Samantha
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 937.175257732 139% => OK
No of words: 283.0 206.0 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6148409894 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42627863411 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 127.690721649 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600706713781 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 290.88556701 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7689539643 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8235294118 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58823529412 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173941020591 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528838003124 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556222820417 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1176365453 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029322186033 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.