Dear Susan,
How are you? I hope you and your family are fine. I received your letter yesterday about your interest in learning about a famous news item in my country. Let me tell you, it is somewhat relatable to what I have just faced recently.
As you are aware, the Bollywood actor's suicide investigation is the main news headline. His death was declared as a suicide, however, the investigation reports show a different story to it. It is reported that the actor was under depression as he felt left out from the film industry as he was not a star kid. Many well-known Directors have also tried to ruin his career. Therefore, people from various cities have come ahead to revolt against favouritism and nepotism.
People have shown a lot of interest towards this case as his story is quite similar to other struggling actors. In fact, favouritsm is present everywhere, whether the film industry or people's regular life. Do you remember I had told you about how excited I was for my promotion this year? Unfortunately, I didn't get promoted as my boss felt his friend's daughter deserved it more than me even though she has joined my office just some months ago.
Call me sometime when you are free if you want to know more about the suicide case.
Take care.
Best regards,
Kriti
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 307, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...y promotion this year? Unfortunately, I didnt get promoted as my boss felt his friend...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, well, as for, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73568281938 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53731491346 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665198237885 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2377431342 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6666666667 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1333333333 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2143472474 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627726460136 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839375004142 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130904879308 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110304403405 0.0580467560999 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.